Novel Response Commentary
In the interest of giving extended comment:
First of all, please ALWAYS list the books you have already read as shown on the "form." This helps me to orient to your analysis.
Next, be full in your explanation of the threads, especially now while you are doing the early development of your thinking on them. This is the time to try out some ideas to see if they fit. Later you can alter the threads a bit to keep them attuned to your new findings.
Lastly, always relate the threads as they appear in the current book with those that you have documented with earlier works read. This updates me and you on your finding to date.